Link: https://twinery.org/2/#/stories/8582af7d-e0bb-4515-bd85-62337d240249
Questions:
- Is the gameplay too long？
- Is the storyline logically coherent now？
- Are the endings in this version perhaps a bit too tragic？
- Technical question: Should the options appear all at once, or is it better for them to appear one by one?
- Any other suggestions？
