1. Here’s a link to my game in progress on twine: https://twinery.org/2/#/stories/3bdb254b-c42a-4d8c-8e72-2485a2f03b93
2. Questions you’d like our feedback on:
- My game is quite text heavy. How should I format/present the text in a way that is both digestible and narratively engaging?
- I’ve had to revise the narrative over the weekend to rethink about some choice designs, which didn’t make a lot of sense logically/ with the plot. Please let me know if the current prototype has a better flow narrative-wise.
